To escape all harshness around,
I stepped into the valley of dreams.
Where there lie all sorts of dreams,
Waiting to be dreamed.
Sweet dreams,
Enchanting dreams,
Aspiring dreams.
There at the corner of the valley
Flows a stream of Lethe.

In order to dream well
one should loose all remembrance

I sipped the water of forgetfulness,
And was lost in the captivating valley.

Where there were sweet dreams
Of bed of roses,
Pixies with pointed noses.
Of lilies,chrysanthemum and hyacinths,
All in fascinating labyrinths.

Of rainy nights,
Of gallant knights,
Of far away lands
Of valleys and islands

Of sweet love song,
Of Keat’s Nightingale’s song,
that I always long .

And of kingdom of heart,
where every end is a fresh start.
Of a die-heart lover
The one that can shower
Endless kisses!

But wait!
I am an aging soul
My dreaming days are over!
Sweetness has  replaced bitterness
Now there is no hope
As one cant dream
With silver strings ,
Now no more springs.
Yes my dreaming days are over
No more dreaming
I should give up all my dreams
All hopes!

Think I will feel better
As proverb says
” Since I have lost hope I am feeling much better”
So should give it a try
Will give up all my Dreams.

But is dreaming not the other name of living?
Should I give up life too ?

There are not only sweet dreams
That only fuel desires,
There are also one that aspires.
Dreams are milestones
Dreams are divine zones
Dreams are illuminations
Dreams are revelations
Dream on!
Dream on!

                                                         Rameeza Nasim

                                                        28-November 2015

                                                                  Karachi 🙂



  1. mnmalhi · December 4, 2015

    Reblogged this on missmalhi and commented:

    My New poem 🙂


  2. smiling7 · December 6, 2015

    Excuisite. Dreams come true or not is the questio.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. mnmalhi · December 6, 2015

    well this is another question:) Mine were o dreaming or giving it up 🙂 I think one should dream on and if Allah’s will with it nothing can stop them in becoming true 🙂 dream on


  4. authoraamir · May 22, 2016

    Reblogged this on authoraamir and commented:
    Brilliant by a wonderful friend and emerging author.

    Liked by 1 person

    • mnmalhi · May 22, 2016

      Thankyou 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      • authoraamir · May 23, 2016

        Most welcome dear. : ) Keep going strong.


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